Typos and other glitches in the whitepaper #14
Description
I just discovered this project and want to thank you by reporting back some glitches I found in the whitepaper:
Page 5:
Its clear that ... -> It's clear that ...
Page 7:
The commencement speech "This is Water" was hold in 2005, not 2009, according to Wikipedia. 2009 is when it was published in book form.
Page 10:
Roughly speaking, Reo(Troy, Abed) reflects how much the friends Troy and Abed have in common have paid attention to Troy versus Abed.
Something seems to be wrong with this sentence.
Page 29:
... understand the import of this choice.
should probably be importance
Page 32:
... value slow receeds ... -> ... value slowly recedes ...
Page 41:
Synereo is chooses optimistic algorithsm -> Synereo is chooses optimistic algorithms
Page 53:
tappng -> tapping