Breakout Room 8: Update main.py #12
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| #Mad Libs Generator Project | ||
| //Loop back to this point once code finishes | ||
| loop = 1 | ||
| while (loop < 9): | ||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. The loop is currently running much less than the required amount. |
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| // All the questions that the program asks the user | ||
| noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||
| plural_noun = input("Choose a plural noun: ") | ||
| second_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||
| place = input("Name a place: ") | ||
| adjective = input("Choose an adjective (Describing word): ") | ||
| third_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||
| // Displays the story based on the users input | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") | ||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. seond_nounThere is a typo for the above variable. |
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| print ("Be kind to your",plural_noun,"in",place) | ||
| print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".") | ||
| print () | ||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. There is an empty print statement here. It's so lonely! We could incorporate another way to create a whitespace between the lines. |
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| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. Consider using a f-string for readability✨ ✨ |
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| // Loop back to "loop = 1" | ||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. If you want to reset the loop, you would want to do this before the while loop, I believe. |
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| loop = loop + 1 | ||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. I think using syntactic sugar would be so awesome here! :) |
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Consider using a for loop starting here and have it loop 10 times. 🐶
Also for Python, we use # for comments. Unfortunately, this is not Javascript :(